I think im in love

these are old poems i wrote, so just read them and let me know what you think. thank you.

 

My heart over powers me.I do not know if I am in love,But everytime i look at you or even just talk to you. I get butterflys. I can not breathe when I talk to you. My heart feels like it just stops.Your all I want and need in my life.I can not sleep at night.I cry night and day.Because all I want and need is you.I think honestly I'm in love with YOU.

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[Rev. Fr, S. D. Blankens..]

I love this. :) Some miner grammar mistakes, but nothing too major. :)
Love you Kels!

S. D. Blankenship