A Lovely Tale

A Lovely Tale

A Poem by Heidi
"

how i finally see the end.......

"

So, she asked the mirror to show her the fool.

The mirror quickly answered her request.

Upon seeing the image she laughed and said, "Stupid girl."

She died there, starring at the mirror.

The only image she ever saw was her own reflection.

© 2008 Heidi


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Awesome as well as cute, I like this alot

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This made me laugh, but I felt kind of bad too...
I didn't laugh out loud - it was more like an inside chuckle!....
Makes you think too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice ... kind of funny I thought ... sad in a way too I guess

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow this has a powerful punch... we all play the fool now and then, just remember that the person in the mirror is also a human being.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! now this is deep, This is well expressed with great meaning.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 9, 2008

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