LOVING A MORTAL

I lay here forever

Streatched out on your mortal grave

As my eyes follow the shadows of night

Keeping my dark thoughts from heavens light

One day I shall spread my demon wings

And fly away

I lay here on your mortal grave

thinking what your love has done to me

leaving me here to walk the earth alone

When will what I feel be through with me?

When will it stop ending in catastrophe?

Laying here,then, and now

I wonder why

Why I didnt change you

Make you my own

To life your life

from dream to dream

So I dread the day I let you go

Making that dream end

I lay here forever

Streatched on your mortal grave

Following the shadows of the night

Keeping dark thoughts from heavens light

Spreading my demon wings

and fly away

Why couldnt I change you

Making you mine forever

Instead of living the dreams to dream

I made them end

Author's Note

Poem written 7 years ago, its rough around the edges.

Reviews

[.:Naiira Harlow:.]

It's still a rather good poem, but you are right about the rough edges. It has enough feeling, but it could have so much more. Well done all in all.