I WANT YOU

 

Let me tease your skin with whispered breaths

Let me close the distance between us

Without taking a single step

A room that stands still

Spins around naked porcelain shoulders

A wanted seduction

Desires of laced straps

I stare with unblinking eyes

A moment measured in rapid heartbeats

My thoughts stumble clumsily

We’re first time lovers of stilettos

A butterfly effect of endless possibilities

Your my handprint on my window

My guilty sin

Oh how questions linger on the tips of tongues

What beautiful colours our lipsticks would have made

Melting together on quivering lips

But alas... I turn away

Reviews

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

This one caught me off-guard. I was pretty blown-away. GREAT work!

[Faith]

that was a really intense poem,
"We're first time lovers of stilettos", that was my favorite line
so descriptive.
lovely job

-Faith♥

[Lydia]

Great piece, sultry and smooth and all around good. I found a typo though.. 'your my handprint' should be 'you're'. That is all :)

[DC Gentleman]

oooooh.... sizzlin.. I love it.. tastefully explicit tale of almost forbidden love....

Excellent write..

[Marina]

This is great! Very well written.
I don't think it could have been written any better.

xxstaysweet,
rina