A Poem by Adora.xo

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Lather me in lavender,

Rinse me in rose,

Wrap me in silk,

Show me what you know.

Dip me in spices,

Feed me sweets,

Cover me with cream,

Tell me why our skin heats.

Soak me in your scent,

Fill me with fire,

Cool me down with words,

No, darling, I will not tire.

Just caress me with feathers,

Seduce me with your lips,

I am your aphrodisiac,

Let me unman you with my kiss.


© 2011 Adora.xo

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Posted 11 Years Ago

Nicely written! You stayed true to the form in a superb way! I think you executed this nicely, nice rhymes, nice word choices. Great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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sweet in thought and hot

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like the picture you chose to couple with this poem, This is one lucky man. well written indeed!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I think you seduced many with this poem. Hot!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Loved it especially the last line

Posted 11 Years Ago

This poem has an excellent flow and fits together perfectly. Very enjoyable, great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love the simple demands and attempt at rhythm ~ it is almost there. Nice work!

Posted 11 Years Ago

A strong woman knows what she wants. A wise woman goes after it with no holding back. This is a very sensual piece done without over detailing and done with a delectable taste that stirs up all the senses and lets the imagination run rapid.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Very nice poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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