grave thoughts.

This is a pome about how some peopel that are dead may be forgotton,but someone will allways be thinking about them. :) <3 (: R.I.P

Plants on the grave,over grow.

Butterflys hidden in these weeds.

Black wings make these forgotton thoughts fly.

                      

                 R.I.P

This is 4 the forgotton...

Reviews

[WynterPhoenix]

The only thing I can criticize on is a few spelling errors, but this is an amazing poem. Short but it gets the point across and there is so much meaning in the few words you've chose. Great write.

[Rose F.]

Short, but very deep. I like it. =)

[Babieegirl]

nice write. Careful on your spelling though! (=