I'm Scared

I wrote this about 2 and a half months ago, I was afraid about my relationship..I'm in the middle of working on a sort of sequel to this.

So...is it bad if I'm afraid?
of so many things in this world that's began to fade?
is it bad if I'm scared of pain?
being hurt and played like a game?
left for dead with no one to care?
'Cause I leave my heart and soul to bare?
what if rejection is my biggest fear?
I'm always afraid our time grows near
what if I'm afraid of being right?
thinking maybe one day well fight
knowing you'll leave just like the rest
trying to put this love to a test

Reviews

[Aurora Lynn]

Good poem! It flowed really nicely from one line to another, which is good. I could tell that this poem was written based on real emotions rather than imagined stuff, because it rang really true. Well done.

Just two grammar mistakes, easily fixed one. In the first line you had two '..', which I believe should either be three or none at all. And in the sixth line you forgot to capilalize you 'i'. Other than that I really enjoyed reading it!

And if you want more people to read you pieces, I would suggest that you review other people's pieces. There is nothing that makes people want to review your pieces more than if you say nice thing about their poems!

~Aurora