"Fix Me"

Tick
Tock

Time's almost up
They send me to you

You're supposed to find
"What's wrong with me"

I don't think there's anything
"Wrong with me"

They want to
"Fix me"

Don't try to fix me
I'm not broken

                                     "Are you ever gonna talk?"
You ask


1,2,3,4
Breathes you take
Before clicking your pen

And saying
                                       "We're done for today"


I know that today
I fail

Author's Note

Hopefully I fixed all the grammatical errors?

Reviews

[LeaflessTree]

The format makes me want to read it more, but same with cooki-eater I side to, you have some gramatical errors once I went back and looked at them. Awesome poem though =)

[pamzilla. &hear..]

You had some grammatical errors but I barely saw them because of how amazing this poem was, I'm definitely adding it to my library :)

99/100