I can't leave you behind.

open to interpretation.

I’ve run faster than I could ever do.

But in the end you cope up with me like the river do.

How can I ever leave you behind?

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I must know the muse behind this

[Faceless Poet]

oh... now that's intriguing, what can it be? would you mind telling me.
thanks for checking up one of my work.

[Saddam]

When you run with all your force, and suddenly you found that where my love is? Then you look behind, oh that's my love is. This is a very deary poem for me with a thought. Great read and write.

[Faceless Poet]

Thank you Ssad, It is a nice perspective. I like it, I am greatful with your visit and review.

[Saddam]

my pleasure dear friend....

[paleshadeofwhite]

I like it very nice please write some more :D

[Faceless Poet]

thank you :)

[paleshadeofwhite]

most welcome :D

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehehe! You can't leave me behind. I'm running as fast as you could. I'm a survivor, remember that, my monster. You can't beat me in this challenge!

[Faceless Poet]

LOL, bwahahaha, the monster doesn't admit defeat. The moster have too many faces, too many cases, too many places to hide and seek. bwahahaha... I will defeat you

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Oh, I'm afraid...that the monster will cry. Hak hak! I'm sure, I will defeat you. The flower has many colors...and there are may walls, many calls, many balls...LOL

[Faceless Poet]

LOL, bwahahaha, the flowers has balls. The monster never falls, I brawl as you crawl to your knees, the mark of your downfall… bwahahaha

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

The monster is talkative...but still so naive..he doesn't know I'm so active!

[Faceless Poet]

In the pillars that is so high, my might is my sky, in sight I shall fly and soon be invisible in you eyes... bwahahaha

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Go and hide from me...But I promise I shall see...that monster will bow down before me!

[Faceless Poet]

ha! I am my own kingdom, I am my own freedom, none shall overcome... bwahahaha....
I rise as the ties cease, sunshine is my price surprise. bwahahaha....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

And now I have the throne...did your fears strike you to the bone...Oh, I want to see your tears, soon!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hey, you're so lazy, haggard monster! Your responses are so late, my dear. I have to wait while eating here. Ah, you're so slow in making tongue twister!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

And now, I shall declare. I am the proud, lucky winner...in this simple challenge, haggard monster!

1 point!

[Faceless Poet]

ha! little rhyming falls short, a tiny retort. it sound so force, my course is much better for I am a crooner, slow yet a winner...bwahahaha....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

It's not forced rhyme, isn't it clear? Recite it aloud and you will hear...you're just a deaf, now I know, my dear! Hakhak!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

1 point, give it to me. You are a cheater, I know you're guilty...Just go there and start hiding from me.

[Faceless Poet]

no points - coints and toinks shall be given, proof of things shall be proven. no winner, no loser, the battle had just began, and I'll know you'll run...bwahahaha...

[Faceless Poet]

the cheaters game, is the gamers pain. So, no shall I cheat, because I am the one to beat, my sore loser. bwahahaha

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, cheater...cheater! You are the loser! I have to leave you here...for I have something to ponder...You're wasting my time, monster.. You don't accept I'm the winner...

Time-out, monster. I have important thing to do. Thanks for the points. See yah!

[Faceless Poet]

goodbye my sore loser, I am no cheater, i am the light among the monster, so i shall rise as you ponder... bwahahaha