Betrayal

Crying is soothing,

though cold and wet.

Crying is private,

so better yet

I must hide it.

My eyes will have to ache.

I will have to deal with the burn.

My view will be blurry,

but you haven't noticed yet.

Thank you for the kind gesture,

you know who you are.

No thanks to her ignorance.

Betrayal is as painful as a new scar.

Thank you for telling me

exactly what was going on.

And no, I'm not rude, but you.

So if I'm wrong, so be it.

You haven't noticed yet.

Author's Note

I didn't plan for any rhyme scheme, so that's not really some sort of issue I was having or anything, just a coincidence.

Reviews

[Pi Cee]

We've all been betrayed. One way or another, it sucks but it happens. And they don't care, so I'm sorry. Good write though.