Eternal

Dark Poetry

It is a night of dark desire, a song of sorrow,
wolves vent their pain. The beautiful one
rises.

Curling wisps of death shroud his pale form,
an everlasting desire.

His ebony hair cascades over
translucent ivory brow, and his
full crimson lips part slightly, to taste the
blood streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
him.

Now a night of pain,
I smile vaguely.

Reviews

[Eloha]

I think shamanistic themes suit you very well. Maybe the wolf is not your totem but this sounded ancient.

[Yheela]

Thank you.
I'm actually not sure what animal is my totem, I'd like it to be a cat because I love cats. But I wouldn't be surprised if it's magpie or something. ^_^

[♥ Kinnixk]

Wow, you're a teacher? You're the first I've met that loves to write! :D And you do it very beautifully, I might add. (:

100/100

[Yheela]

Well thank you!
I'm so happy you like it. ^_^

[♥ Kinnixk]

You're welcome :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

dark AND deep I would say, very interesting though....I loved the curling wisps of death...Are you sure you are a teacher?

[Yheela]

I'm the cool teacher who quotes Star Trek and talk gaming with my students. XD

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think half of my teachers e=were klingons..I could hardly understand what they were talking about half the time...And MY...were they ugly

[Yheela]

LOL
I teach at a Tech Collage (or maybe Upper Secondary would be more spot on) and most students are complete nerds and geeks.
Easy to get high score with my guys, all I have to do is talk nerdy to them! XD

[Dr. Wood ?]

yeah but you must also have to wear nerdy glasses and apply a few nerdy pimples...

[Yheela]

Glasses I have, pimples can be drawn with a red lip liner ^_^