exploration across your skin

your skin against mine is the only thing I dream about and I wish that the night was twice as long as the day. inside these four walls, time has stopped, it's your breath mixed with mine that's the only sound, the only thing that tells us that somewhere else the sands of time run against the inevitable end. beneath my lips you taste of ambrosia, nectar of the gods and I whisper them thanks, they allow me to feel you. my fingers learn your lines, read the braille on your back, draw new boundaries. awake and dreaming, the only thing I know is my skin against yours.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Such a lovely expression of love Yheela. You portray it as pleasure not duty as giving not taking. Such a lovely calm piece.

[emmajoy]

For me there's a touch of myth here, maybe the slow meaningful walk towards those final words, Passion without an excess of gilding!

[Yheela]

Thank you for your fine review.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Jenny this is so sensually beautiful. Well written and captured in verse. Such a love song; he must be a very luck man!

[Yheela]

Thank you!

[Cole Hayley]

I love how this feels like a diary entry to me, so cryptic and beautiful.

[Yheela]

Thank you Cole, very glad you like it.

[Lisa Ring]

I saw Ian review this in the news feed and noticed we both have a "thing" for the feel of skin. Beautiful, romantic, and meaningful. I love it.

[Lisa Ring]

But I did NOT read what Ian wrote before I wrote my review : I I did not copy him :)

[Ian H Morrison]

it would have neen an honour if you had

[Lisa Ring]

:)

[Ian H Morrison]

;)

[Yheela]

Well I'm so very happy that you like it, thank you!

[Ian H Morrison]

lovely ,sensual and romantic i love this so much it really is bloody good

[Yheela]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it.

[Ian H Morrison]

you are welcome