let's be friends

there's no end to the cuteness that is you

those pretty blue eyes

full of stars and magic

I could swim and then drown in them

and you would never know

you laugh at me

your blonde hair sweeps over my face

and my body reacts in ways I've never known

no one else I know wears pink mittens

and matching knitted scarf

there are no hard edges to your body

soft roundness made for hugging

this tingling sensation in my fingers

can only be cured by touching your face

let's be friends

I never want to lose you

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Friends or infatuation? This is so freakin' cute and plays on the adorable writer you clue us in with when reading your other poetry. I love the honest critique you give of this person AND how you see him, too!! Very nice..... Beautiful Yheela. xoxo -Mark

[Yheela]

Thanks!
I guess it could be either, it both. But then to me love is love.

[Yheela]

or*, not it...

[Patrick Henry]

I say both!! I love it. You could read this poem aloud with war in the background in the beginning of a movie, and it STILL would be a pretty poem to hear. : ) "Love is Love" ....I like that!! I feel like writing that every time I comment on one of your poems now!! lol It would be selfish of me to dos o, for I love your poems, but it might suit me more than it does you. : ) Instead of "shelving" all your poems, wouldn't it be easier for the AUTHOR to be shelved and saved?!! ; ) xoxo -Your Mark

[Yheela]

LOL

[Claire Twinn]

Sooo sweet!

[Yheela]

Thanks.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think that you are better than you imagine you are...and if you do imagine you are..you are better than that...there is not a word out of place here..great stuff

[Yheela]

Some days I'm invincible, after reading your review this might become one of them. Thank you!

[Dr. Wood ?]

all part of the service, I meant every word

[Yheela]

^_^

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh my God this is beautiful Jenny. So soft and loving and honest with stars in his eyes! LOVED
'there are no hard edges to your body
soft roundness made for hugging
this tingling sensation in my fingers
can only be cured by touching your face'

[Yheela]

Thank you!
This came to me while writing on my novel.
Creativity is wonderful! ^_^