bone meal

beneath the skin

behind all nerves

your words carved

to the marrow

slowly crushing bones

body falling apart

beneath the skin

no longer any hope

Author's Note

(translation from Swedish)

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

: ) Damn!! lol I have read you for a while now and somehow missed the title of this poem. Why am I the only one here? The very name itself is something to click on and get curious about!! I like it. It's like my whole skeletal shell is violently shaking, waiting to break free and explode. : ) xoxo -Mark

[Yheela]

Thanx, glad you like it. ^_^

[Dr. Wood ?]

damn clever those Swedes

[Yheela]

Aren't we though. ^_^

[Rob Santana]

I love the first 4 lines alot. Intense imagery for me. Nicely done.

[Yheela]

Thank you.