I've Forgotten Your Face

Our warm embrace,
fills me with disgrace.
I no longer want to trace;
I've forgotten you face.

My mind once stuck in trance,
the very one that loves to dance,
Is now filled with only hate,
I've forgotten your face.

You lament about your love,
shower me with care from above,
but I look past that with digust,
I've forgottne your face.

When I agree to your terms,
my words are really lies.
I know I've turned "fake",
but i've forgotten your face.

Now I can hate a little less;
search for my reasons to be this way.
Nothing seems to make sense,
Except...How I've forgotten your face.

Author's Note

lol If you didn't notice, the poem's shaped like someone's head..Which would make it faceless as well..
And...Yeah.. Lmao. xD

Reviews

[Marina]

This is greatly written. A strong meaning, I think.
It's fantastic.
:] And I love the shape face thingy. It's great!
;D Lawl.

XxStayyyySweeet,
maRina

P.S- Love the music on your profile.
;D Love Escape The Fate. {ISMFOF/Dropdeadgorgeous}
Ronnnniieees a babe.

[Gheeneil]

The repetition of the line, "I've forgotten your face", makes the persona's intention more evident. Meaning, she no longer remembers the feeling anymore.

[Crazy Cat Man]

I like this poem.........i should write my own poem.......and call it......I forgot your name

great write :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I find this very powerful, trying to deny that you miss someone and looking for reason to hat them just so you can move on... nicely done.

[visions of doom]

tis a strong poem ye have there , it is not easy to forget a face nor what that face meant to you but you do justice to the power of trying to forget .

[Phibby Venable]

Yes, really excellent work...it is so hard to forget and you have to remember to forget sometimes.
very fine.

[Buni]

excellent work!! love this!
soo many people can relate to this and you did a wonderful job to explain how you feel!
a job well done!