The Warriors Journey

You Gave Me Direction

Through the two diverse paths

There, we made a connection

now, a primrose path

 

Confidence rising

holding power unknown

a warrior is comprising

now able to hold one's own

 

The journey along the way

will one day reach it's end

but the warrior will not drift away

the soul will only transcend

for it has been resurrected

Reviews

[songstress]

This is truly beautiful, and it speaks volumes about your character...I find such sincerity and and vividness in writing rare and oddly enough I love the emotional pain and yearning displayed here. great work.

[deeps]

the soul will only transcend
for it has been resurrected

Simply outstanding words here. I really enjoyed this write. This is very well written and expressed.

[Fallen Angel]

i like the second stanza best, though this whole poem is good, i feel heart and soul in it and i love that. good write

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

great write, but my fave is the last stanza:)