My Inner Melody

A meaningful poem I wrote, during unpleasant times.

My Inner Melody

 

My inner melody,

It mutters not a word,

The bass thunders in the back,

My feelings are now heard.

 

My inner melody,

Which only my ears hear,

I shall not lose this tempo,

To me, it sounds so dear.

 

My inner melody,

No other sound compares,

I know the song will die,

I know the song will wear.

 

My inner melody,

The song has turned to hate,

You sour calls of evil,

I lie down, and try to wait.

 

My inner melody,

The whisp of wind has blew,

And now my song is over,

And it's all because of you...

 

 

Author's Note

Deep emotions went into this, so, tell me what you think! :D

Reviews

[Lilly]

yes - it is deep. i like this - it flows nicely and is so full of emotion!

[Krazy On The Outside]

I loved it!
It was deep!
=)

[Dillon Cotter]

this is really deep but very detailed. i can feel the emotion, and i like how u repeated "My Inner Melody" to remind me after each stanza. i like this!

-will