Take My Hand

Feeling vs hearing the words....I LOVE YOU

 

                        Take My Hand

 

You wanted honesty, said; tell how you feel.

Asked for words, to prove I’m for real.

 

If in the blink of an eye, hurt can be felt. Then

with the whisper of a word, a lie can be dealt.

 

The answer you seek, is not found in forced

chatter.

 

It’s in a touch, a simple glance, let your

feelings see what matters.

 

If in a word, the truth really lied, not a one

of us…would ever cry.

 

The word itself, said way to often, over open

hearts as well as coffins.

 

I need not hear it, to know it’s true. Simply

to feel it; coming from you.

 

The words I can speak easily; if that you

demand, just a word of advice…

take my hand                             

 

                                                    Yvette Shaw

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

Those last lines were awesome. It was probably the music on my itunes that gave it the enhanced power, but still, it was really good.

Feelings speak louder than words, this was very touching. I liked it. Good write.

-Bryce

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

this moved me. it made me feel safe, comfortable, ready to take a leap with a coushioned fall. the words seem to flow like water.

[Angel's Lady]

Simply to feel it; coming from you. - Very true...Great write. Very eloquently written. And very beautifully said! Good job.