Disconnected

Disconnected

A Poem by Rilaya-Endgayme
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This is a song that I wrote when I was twelve. I wrote it after getting over an obsession I had with a resemblance between three girls. Enjoy! :)

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Verse 1

It was just so unexplainable,

my obsession for you

You were all I thought about

But it was a story with one side

I was never on your mind

I was obsessed

But now I need to be

living my own life, being free. . .

 

CHORUS

So I like your smile,

the color of your eyes

So what?

Why was I so blind,

wasting so much time?

I just need to step back,

get disconnected from this habit

And I know that you won't mind

 

Verse 2

Every now and then,

I'll think about you

The only difference is,

I won't be so focused

'cause right now, I need to move on. . .

 

CHORUS

 

Bridge

I've thought about it,

and now I realize

that it would kind of crazy

to be idolized

Why did I put you up so high?

 

CHORUS (3 times)

© 2014 Rilaya-Endgayme


Author's Note

Rilaya-Endgayme
Do any of the lines in this song remind you of things happened in your past? What part of the song do you like the most? What part do you like the least?

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It just reminds me of the most intense love it can happen,but just as you say in the end,the love may be fantastic but the person you idolize don't deserve it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rilaya-Endgayme

6 Years Ago

Actually, I was thinking more along the lines when I ended an obsession over someone who was indiffe.. read more
I love the chorus, I sing that part quicker. If you wrote this when you were so young you should really show your songs to someone. They're really good. You could make a job out of this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rilaya-Endgayme

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :) I have shown my songs to my friends when I was a lot younger, but I haven't written mu.. read more
luv2dream

8 Years Ago

hahaha
and a very good song. A strong, strong write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


it maked me remember my horrible friend that has a crush on me....
and when he invited me to go to his house, we went to his room then i saw a picture laying on the floor i took a little more seeing with the picture and i saw it was a picture of me!
when it was my birth day and all my class mates greeted me i didn't really though that he had always been carrying a camera all this time!

thats it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes, it is!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a song, I presume?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 18, 2009
Last Updated on April 14, 2014