Fantasy Duel

Fantasy Duel

A Poem by Rilaya-Endgayme

Verse 1

When we were young,

I fell in love with you

It wasn't long until

I told you the truth

You were everything to me

And I asked you, you said no,

I was heartbroken

Now all I do is dream about you

Wondering if you're

ever coming around

 

CHORUS

All these fantasies

telling me he likes me

In the real world I know it's a lie,

but I can't seem to tell him goodbye

Now it's all a Fantasy Duel

these images fighting in my head

And I'm just sitting here,

wishing it would all come true

 

Verse 2

When we were young,

I fell into a trap

I kept wondering if you ever

liked me back

No, I asked you, you said no,

I was heartbroken

Now all I do think about you

Knowing that you're

never coming around

 

CHORUS

 

Bridge

I never gave up on you

And you never said yes to me

Do I have to let go?

Can I keep going?

Answer me, please

 

CHORUS (2 times)

 

Wishing it would all come true

Just wishing it would all come true

© 2009 Rilaya-Endgayme


Author's Note

Rilaya-Endgayme
Does it relate to you in any way? What is your favorite part (if you have a favorite)?

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Actually...yeah. It does relate to me. VERY very good. You have definetley captured the idea of what most of us have to go through...so much pain. Trying to convince ourselves that no matter what they say or do, they love us back. And as we spend hours and hours trying to think of ways to get them to admit it, we only fall back with t he fear of another dose of rejection.
Very well written. Keep it up!(I don't have a favorite part)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thanks! That's exactly what I was trying to say! When I wrote this, I was being so obsessive about this one guy who goes to my school. I even told him! I knew that he wasn't really into me, but I was always trying to get him to say that he did. It never worked. I went ten months without him ever liking me back. It was pure misery!

Posted 14 Years Ago


"When I asked you, you said no" I like that.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Actually...yeah. It does relate to me. VERY very good. You have definetley captured the idea of what most of us have to go through...so much pain. Trying to convince ourselves that no matter what they say or do, they love us back. And as we spend hours and hours trying to think of ways to get them to admit it, we only fall back with t he fear of another dose of rejection.
Very well written. Keep it up!(I don't have a favorite part)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 15, 2009
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