Paint
A Poem by
ZackOfBridge
Fresh Coat
I want to paint
my life a fresh coat
of the very cool
gray
you like so much
When I finish
you are welcome,
I invite you
to watch
me dry
So you can
tell me whether
I may have
overlooked
and missed a spot
© 2014 ZackOfBridge
Reviews
I love the first stanza.."I want to paint my life a fresh coat of the very cool gray you like so much.."
It starts off incredibly strong. Although short, your message was beautifully conveyed. Well done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for reading Phoen-ix, much appreciated :)
"I want to paint
my life a fresh coat
of the very cool
gray
you like so much"
Posted 9 Years Ago
"I want to paint
my life a fresh coat
of the very cool
gray
you like so much"
Wonderful paint and painting of words. Bravo......................
Posted 9 Years Ago
Wonderful paint and painting of words. Bravo......................
9 Years Ago
Hey thanks a lot man, I'll have to check out some of your work.
9 Years Ago
No problem. You are welcome...:)..................
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Added on November 3, 2014
Last Updated on November 3, 2014
Author
ZackOfBridge Camarillo, CA
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