Stare

This is just a random piece of writing that i might use in a short story i'm trying to write. Please tell me what you think

I remember the day, I stared into his eyes.

I saw no emotion, his face was just blank.

I could feel his sin, it was as bitter as gin.

He just sat there………. It was as if he felt no fear

It was as if…….. he was in another dimension

It just bothered me…… he hurt so many

And he just didn't care

You could just feel the hate

The more he stayed quiet the more they wanted to riot

Then it happened

He was sentenced to death

The families cried tears of closure

The prosecutors proud of their victory

But something just wasn't right

His stare was no longer blank

He had a smirk

And as everything quieted down and the judge asked him for his final statement

He just looked up and smiled, and said something that still haunts me to this day,” Thank you.”

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, i'm just a young writer trying to get better