Losing Me

Losing Me

A Poem by Zeo Writer
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Losing yourself, being invisible to the world

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I’m invisible, of no material…

I walk into a crowded room
No ones looks no one has a clue
I raise my hand, nobody sees
I speak out, there’s no response
I’m losing me…
Sitting back at home
Induce on drugs and jack
Illusions bearing my mind
Even they excludes me

I’m invisible…of no material…
I can’t explain it…I’m losing me…
I’m invisible…of no material…
I can’t explain it…I’m losing me
Losing me…

I stare upon her golden head
She never looks or knows I’m there
I wipe my eyes she walks near
Up I go trying once last time
I opened my mouth she walks by
She has taunts for nerds behind
What can I do, what do I need…

I’m invisible…of no material…
I can’t explain it…I’m losing me…
I’m invisible…of no material…
I can’t explain it…I’m losing me
Losing me, losing me, losing me…

Time and time again
Doors close and close again
Waiting for my night
Yeah right! (*Gun shot*)

I’m invisible…of no material…
I can’t explain it…I’m losing me…
I’m invisible…of no material…
I can’t explain it…I’m losing me…
I’m invisible…of no material…
I can’t explain it…I’m losing me
Losing me, losing me, losing me…

© 2009 Zeo Writer




Reviews

Lyrics to song? It definitely has that rhythm and chorus. I loved the part about illusions even excluding the persona. It is such an image of complete and total loneliness. Sad, sad, but a good write.
Cheers.

Posted 14 Years Ago


is this a song? its really good, great job

Posted 14 Years Ago



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