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A Poem by Brummy59

When I woke up this morning, I reached for my phone, only to remember you won't be

home. This day without you brought back the agony and pain, this day is the day you

change age but not this year, you went away. I cry of the thought of you being gone yet

I rejoice in the memories that strengthen our bond. First time I met you we were just

kids, I called em Steve n you said it's Steven! N I flipped my lid. Man I wish you didn't do

what you did but I'm in no place to judge cause we both just kids. Today, well today my

heart hurts, and... sadness lurks, but I know your up their looking down on me. I know

you wanna set our pain free, but it just can't be, you see we are all ok physically but

mentally the thought can drop me to my knees, it has made me question my god and spit

venom at people who try and comprehend. I know it's not right so I just try to

pretend But you wouldn't believe the pain I'm in. I feel like a part of my heart was

taken away.... Yet we rejoice in your memory this day. Not on this Earth but always

with me in spirit . I'm screaming happy birthday to Heaven and I hope you hear it.

Author's Note

Sorry for my grammar!

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I could feel the intense pain while reading this. Good job Cody(y)

I'm sorry for your loss. *hugs*

The poem is sad, I can feel your emotions from the time. So I think that it is a great poem.

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Added on March 13, 2015
Last Updated on March 16, 2015

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