Love Transits

HYSTERIA swallows itself, LUvE becomes EvUL... d decision u would die but not let be made,murder u she will....!
memories that u cherish were just moments wasted for her..., u were just one of the crowd, not punctual enough to even b her chauffeur...

how cud i f*****g fall for his game..?!
wrote it on a paper she did, your bloody f*****g alias..,
threw it in d dustbin and murmured ,
this life would never be d same....

erase all his memory, i shall.., I've got places to visit and people to see..
couple of months and i'll be in the States, no.more of his fake feelings he shall preach..

i wish I had stayed away from him, all he did was manacle me..,
my objectivism was roaring to flee, how dare his words tackle thee...

feelings, she had no for him..., he was just a step on d path....,
i stayed on that step a bit longer, she said, for it reminded me of the man i admired probably the one who took my heart...

tears mean nothing to her , what is it if not just water...
she must move ahead on her path and must let that step be slaughtered ...

Reviews

[Shubham Singh]

This is my first attempt at this sort of thing, so, m up for the suggestions and blunt criticism..

[Sami Khalil]

"feelings, she had no for him..., he was just a step on d path....,
i stayed on that step a bit longer, she said, for it reminded of d man i admired probably d one who took my heart...

tears mean nothing to her , what is it if not just water...
she must move ahead on her path and must let that step be slaughtered ..."


A splendid poem along with the title...Bravo...................

[Shubham Singh]

Thank you sir...! :-)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)....................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh wow such a heartfelt ,pissed of piece of writing .Good job your feelings come across loud and clear

[Shubham Singh]

Thanks for the review Vidya, your appreciation is surely encouraging... :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome keep at it