Fragments, Shards

Thats what i am now

Incomplete

They keep asking for

truths.

Im afraid to give them

answers.

I keep hiding behind

dreams.

Except maybe they're 

realities.

They keep asking for

reasons.

I give them lame

excuses.

I want to live in my

fantasies.

Expect maybe they're

nightmares.

They keep asking for

explantions.

I keep telling them

I dont have them.

Author's Note

You read it left from right...

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is stunning. It makes me think of someone who has mental illness and is quite happy living in their delusional world. It is a place of comfort and easier to manage than real life and when others want an explanation as to why you would want to live that way there is no answer that they will understand. This is what I saw reading this piece.

[Maraline-Elijah]

nicee oneee. i like the way you put it on a page. it makes it seem like it is an argument with the space between the lines. it creates a different feeling as in more prominent

[Rhea752]

WOW this poem is full of emotion the poem is quite simply Wonderful. your work never ceases to amaze me keep it up

[joshua deathdealer]

This is awesome. I love the title and the way you set this up. I like the mysterious feel and I too am to comfortable in my head. lol Excellent work.

[TheSweet]

I think the pessemistic aspect of this one breaks it a little bit. I like the 'me and them' feel to the story - but the layout kinda feels more like bullet points to a fuller poem than a poem itself.

Dunno if you know what I mean here, and I by no means mean to be harsh - the concept of the piece is fantastic. I just feel it could have been fuller, if you understand what I mean... To make it really stand out from experimental works.

Hope you understand my meaning. Thanks for sharing :)

[Max Earns]

Maybe things are just better inside your world? You just GOTTA be...

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh, i can really relate so well with your writing! It's magnificient. Full of strength and inspiration.. it's also very honest. i love how you write! Keep it up!
This piece seems to have ways to be taken. and i like that. WHy give explanations to people when they won't understand anyway? Love this so much! Well done!!

[Death Stalker]

I like this poem, it both makes sense when you read it left to right or right to left, either way, very creative and very good :)

Dar har what if someone read it from right to left?

This is overall very creative in the style I was all excited. Great read I read it more than once.

:O)

[Rasputin]

Actually, I read it from right to left, and bottom to top. Also, I read each individual word backwards. It was weird.