Love you, Hate your girlfriend

It hurts hearing you talk of her. 

How you spawn over every aspect of her motives.

I wanna blast music in my ears and never hear the inflation in your voice. 

 

I've been with you the whole time.

Seen all those girls who broke your heart. 

 

Your perfection attracts the w****s,

Your kindness ignites their desperation. 

 

You fall for their lies.

Your in bliss until her diguise fades.

Your hurt and say you'll never do that again. 

 

Theres not kind way to say this but

I love you, Hate your girlfriends.

 

These girls are like hookers,

And your heart is their money.

 

Your after true everlasting love

They want a fling or

Just to make their ex jealous.

 

 

Author's Note

hmmm need to add more

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

I can relate so much to this. It's well written and relatable win win. Love this piece thanks for sharing!

[Secret Valentine]

I like it. I can relate. its really good hun! Good job. very emotional

[Secret Lullaby]

I love it! I think that if you add more it would be better but its still gret the way it is. And this poem is VERY relateable

[Death Stalker]

Indeed this is very good, I can sense the desperation and anger in this poem, which is good :)

and yeah, I feel like something's missing, but nonetheless, keep at it :)

[Max]

it doesnt rhyme which is a personal ocd thhing. overall though good.

[Deandra Dawn]

I love it....I really don't think you need to add anything.

[Alex Vidmar]

This is good. Really good. Keep it as is. I love it.