the harsh feeling

it's a girl who's confused about what's going on in her relationship.

we were good,

we were glad,

we used to be happy,

and we used to enjoy to the fullest.

by the moment you said you're in love with me

I smiled and of course I said yes,

cause my heart was dying of having you by my side.

in summer we went to the woods,

we cherished, parted, sung, and danced with all our friends.

that moment was unforgettable for everybody.

as time passed everything changed,

it looked like not in a normal condition,

you'd even spend your whole day without talking to me.

yeah man that's so strange,

I thought it was just because you and your boss had quarrels,

but that's not true.

you used to tell me all events that you'd go to,

but you didn't really tell me anything.

my heart is seriously harsh sometimes,

I feel like am dying!

feeling like I don't even exist.

now all of my days am questioning myself,

like what have I done?

 or am I the problem?

I often feel like ceasing it,

but my heart and my mind doesn't let you go.

what should I do now? 

tell me cause the feeling is so harsh.

and am so confused.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. Great job.