Fall

Fall

A Poem by Ali
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We should accept our every fall.

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I used to aim high.
I always want to be right.
I don't care about my mistakes.
I only care about my business.

Then I experienced a hard time.
That truly changed my everytime.
It taught me life lessons.
I can't contain my emotions.

Life knocks me to reality.
Never imagined this as fantasy.
I should look for a brighter side.
Accepting a fall in a different slide.

© 2020 Ali


Author's Note

Ali
Readers, this is my thoughts. Free to add comments and lessons too.

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Your title very much compliments your first line, great write indeed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is really strong...a really quality write about life.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ali

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
light and ashes

3 Years Ago

You're welcome
I felt a strange attraction to your poem and really liked it. Especially the line: Life knocks me to reality....I can totally relate to that

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ali

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this!!!!!

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Ali
Ali

Las Pinas City, NCR , Philippines



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