Jealousy

Very short, more like a drip of thoughts than an actual poem. Thoughts?

I am an ugly speactor,
a venomous snake.
I rear my
ugly head,
and bite you when
you pass.
I am green-eyed,
My name
is envy,
Jealousy.

Reviews

[The Devil's Own B***h]

For a "drip of thoughts" it works pretty well as a poem. ;)

Nicely done

Josie

[Marina]

This is really good.

I defenitly feel like that when im jealous. And it really shows what people are like when there jealous or envious.

Well done.

XxStaySweet,
Rina