Home

I miss you one day i am gone.
I loose out of you!
I feel, I cannot go on.
Something is missing.
Something is haunting my soul.
I see how you put the light.
On the places I could see dark.
I see you put the letters.
On the parts I cannot distinguish my name.
You are the ocean!
The one i would get lost!
Playing with water,
And see the veins in my fingers from the long hours.
I see how i get it back.
I feel it, I want to live.
I feel my days are not enough,
To have you all.
I see, I want it!
To feel you more!
To have you more!
I begin to see everything I could not.
You are the sun,
That makes me see all the flowers in my garden.
The very same,
I found deserted

The one i thought was gone.
You make me see, how beautiful it is, out of the window.
How the rain and the city, make a psychedelic cyber, this time.
Have that feel of being immersed, in the middle of the train.
Express!
Meet all the characters of this novel!
With you everything gets a play scene.
Love is the creator.
There are detectives,
Cartoons,
Cafés of Cities, I create.
Where I chat with the boy at the bar,
In the morning.
And depict the facial expressions,
Of all the people,
Of this Alien land.
Everything is overpowering about you!
But the most of all,
Is how i get it back,
The joy of life,
The very same.
I thought too long at times.
I counted too much days for me to bear.
I want to have you!
This evening!
This night!

I want you tomorrow,
And the next morning!
I want you forever!
You are the sun that melts the snow of my fear,
My insecurity.
You wrap me up!
With you my soul is fire!
With you i melt down!
With you i am complete!
I become enough all of a sudden.
I feel nothing is missing.
I get wings,
For where i could barely walk.
You are the land,
Where all the monsters disappear.
Obstacles become flowers,
Home you are….
….I am yours

Reviews

[Twilight]

This has so many words, and could easily be interpreted in different ways. The title and content, brought different thoughts to mind.

The title refers to one's home. But, does the writer mean this literally? After all, as the saying goes; "home is where the heart is".

Talking of the heart, some lines and verses here; cry out with emotions of longing or yearning. As if, with thoughts of that ideal "special someone".

In the last verse, "insecurity" is mentioned. Interestingly, the idealistically perfect guy, or security of a physical home - could put at end to this writer's insecurity? Of course, only the write knows for sure.

Indeed, insecurity can be just a state of mind. Which can actually fluctuate, for emotional rather than rational reasons; sometimes.

From another perspective, the supposed security of a physical home or man; can sometimes make a woman feel dull or bored - down to the predictable "static" nature of security. After all, sometimes a woman just wants to break away from that ordinary mould; to spread her wings and ride upon whatever waterfalls of pleasure - become available to her...?

[a_methyste]

The poem implies about the heartful life. But what you state is true. Thank you for taking time and reading it.

[Twilight]

For you, I think that it's going to be worth it.

[a_methyste]

Yes for sure.

[Twilight]

Thanks for confirming. Sometimes, like minds just happen to meet by chance. I don't believe in the actuality of so called destiny, but situations sometimes bring about that impression when people bond in some way.