A Poem by aaron

My first true poem in a year. Filed with my solemn pain and love for one who cannot see past me, and therefore cannot in brace me.


How can I find the words?

To best describe my wounds.


How can I find the way?

To best show you my cures.


How can I do this?

How can I try?


I fined only whimpers,

Uttered in confusion and strife.


I fined only madness,

Blasting within my mind.


I have no words!

No fragments of sanity!


I only have emotion.

Raw and uncontrolled.


This loneliness,

And biter pain.


This ice on my heart.


I ache for your touch.

Your lips once more touching my own.


But I feel nothing.

 Not even a cold stone.


You leave me with nothing!



…nothing at all…


© 2015 aaron

Author's Note

did edit in word. hope its good.

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So much raw emotion!

I wonder what the inspiration was behind this..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 Year Ago

Sorry for the 5 year delay on the respond. I just came back again to this sight. The idea was simple.. read more
I could feel the pain in this write,great job

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


7 Years Ago

thanks for the review. and im glad you could feel the emotion of it.

7 Years Ago

you are welcome
Penned with pain and sadness. You feel with the narrator. Excellent...:).....

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


7 Years Ago

thank you very much.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......

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Added on February 17, 2015
Last Updated on February 17, 2015
Tags: love, lose, loss, aaron, grim, alone, nothing, empty, heart, ache, cold, stone, leave, me, raw, uncontrolled, fined, words, word, how, I, wounds, fragments, Gant, amgant, aamgant



San Antonio, TX

Hey all! My name is Aaron G. I just got back to this sight and edited all my poems. Mostly grammar and flow. However I’m glad to be back, and hopefully while I’m at work I can come up with.. more..

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