Nothing

Nothing

A Poem by aaron
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My first true poem in a year. Filed with my solemn pain and love for one who cannot see past me, and therefore cannot in brace me.

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How can I find the words?

To best describe my wounds.

 

How can I find the way?

To best show you my cures.

 

How can I do this?

How can I try?

 

I fined only whimpers,

Uttered in confusion and strife.

 

I fined only madness,

Blasting within my mind.

 

I have no words!

No fragments of sanity!

 

I only have emotion.

Raw and uncontrolled.

 

This loneliness,

And biter pain.

 

This ice on my heart.

 

I ache for your touch.

Your lips once more touching my own.

 

But I feel nothing.

 Not even a cold stone.

 

You leave me with nothing!

NOTHING!

 

…nothing at all…

 

© 2015 aaron


Author's Note

aaron
did edit in word. hope its good.

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So much raw emotion!

I wonder what the inspiration was behind this..

Posted 5 Years Ago


I could feel the pain in this write,great job

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaron

5 Years Ago

thanks for the review. and im glad you could feel the emotion of it.
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you are welcome
Penned with pain and sadness. You feel with the narrator. Excellent...:).....

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaron

5 Years Ago

thank you very much.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......

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aaron
aaron

San Antonio, TX



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Hey all! My name is Aaron G. I just got back to this sight and edited all my poems. Mostly grammar and flow. However I’m glad to be back, and hopefully while I’m at work I can come up with.. more..

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