Need

Need

A Poem by aaron

I sit here and listen to her words,

But they merely echo through my mind,

Only to fade into the emptiness.

 

My heart fades with it.

My voice finding no solace.

 

She talks to me with kindness,

But all I feel are knives.

 

She leans on me with soft smiles,

But all I feel are fangs.

Digging into my flesh

 

I wish I could laugh fully.

I wish I could smile with her.

I wish I could be by her side without wanting more.

 

But I can’t.

Not now.

Not possible.

 

I still want more.

Need more.

© 2015 aaron


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The pain behind this piece is so apparent. It's simple, but eloquent.
Very nice. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like your poem, it touches my feeling, that is a great poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


"I sit here and listen to her words,
But they merely echo threw(through) my mind,
Only t fade into the emptiness.

My heart fades with it.
My voice finding no solace."

A splendid poem full of lovely sadness...Bravo.....


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aaron

7 Years Ago

thank you. also thanks for reviewing my stuff over all. its nice to have someone look at your work. .. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).....

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aaron
aaron

San Antonio, TX



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