Illusionary Visions

A poem that looks at some things from the eyes of a baby. It describes what she sees and uses verbs and adjectives, but no names. The point was to present everyday things in a way that shows a beauty within them that can go unnoticed.

The moon barely complete

Shining silver liquid upon the sand

Flashes of light rim the shore as

Thundering cascades of moonlight fall

 

 

  

Bits of cloud fall to earth

With their own inner light as they twinkle upon the ground

The night is cold, so blankets they make

Covering the land with their own kind of warmth

Reviews

[Sara Muschweck]

What a beautifully descriptive write seeing the world in such a lovely manner. You have such an eloquent way of portraying nature in all of your works. Giving the reader such a magnificent mental image of what your are describing. As always well written.

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Very nicely written, Shelly

[Brentley]

That was relaxing, peacefull and all of those emotions. I enjoyed it it made me happy and more at peace.

[Wolfwind Words]

You alread read this to me! lol, i think it has a unique balance of mother nature implied. very invisioning.