Dreams

Fate Sucks Pt. whatever

Dreams of you and me

Wide awake or fast asleep

Nightmares turned sweet

Best sleep I've had in weeks.

Reviews

[Nigel Newman]

Abbie Hi. I've read the first one, then 2, 3 and 'whatever'! I think you tell stories very well. Having seen 4 'parts' now, I'm guessing that each is like a clip from a movie, each with their own value and poetry, but that there is also something hunting them. We've generally started pretty optimistically around sunrises and dreams, so I'm waiting for the anguished episode that must soon unfold. Even if this one is a retrospective on a finished relationship, it doesn't feel as though we've yet seen the bottom of the pit.

Regards
Nigel

[Abbie]

Thank you for your review, Nigel! I appreciate it. I'm waiting for this anguished episode too because, no, this isn't the end, at least, it certainly doesn't feel like it! More to come

[Nigel Newman]

BTW I've no idea where 'hunting' came from. I think I meant 'uniting' and didn't check what auto spell had done. Sorry for any confusion. I look forward to next instalments!

[Doublejg]

Every single poem is perfect.

[Abbie]

Why thank you, Doublejg! I'm so glad you enjoy my writing! :)

[wordman]

hard when you miss the one you love