The Angel Song...

Some like others have tried and denied,

I pray for my soul,

The hollow grows louder,

Until the night fakes my face,

It’s a beautiful time

 

My dirty hands full of cash,

Spends upon my grinning ash,

I tried healing through your pain,

In a weird symphony of fate,

It’s a beautiful day

 

Blithe did abandon my place,

Turned foetal in disgrace,

And dreamt of this heaven no one seeks,

Lips wrapped, knees screwed to the ground,

It was a beautiful dream

 

They rustled like leaves below the trees,

Beside his body which looked so glad,

And silence broke all the glass,

Life rolled on moss free,

It was a beautiful road

 

The puppet still talks

In bars and empty rooms,

Your love and my beliefs

Are lost somewhere in my words and your grief,

Because it’s a...

Reviews

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. i agree with haseeb ... thou art incredibly gifted ... and your thoughts flow beautifully and the last stanza is my favourite too ...

. you're becoming more and more skillful and sensitive with the language ... love truly gets lost ... and needs to be found ... it can be done but it's a humungous task ... because it's a ... well ... fk up caused by a fkd up world ... do pardon my french, but you know what i mean ... we have to fight it out ... to get anywhere close to light from darkness ...

[Coyote Poetry]

"Blithe did abandon my place,
Turned foetal in disgrace,"
A interesting poem. Easy to play many parts in a life. Hard to see the realness in a life. I like the ending to the excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Hatchling]

Beautifully written. You my dear have a gift!

[Frantzuu]

You have a beautiful mind. Great poem!

[Khaaki]

You are very gifted... thoughts flow so easily when i read this one... wonderful abhas... the last stanza is my fav...