Most of you...

So this is the way you chose,

A few cold words over a budding rose,

A few badges over another life,

But someday you’ll know...

 

You knew when I pretend,

Now I know you pretend,

And I oscillate through the hierarchy of time,

To see the end in a better light,

 

I could only wait,

For you to say no,

For futile positives hurt even more,

From the day when love became a chore,

 

If my words could speak,

The mountains would cry,

But alas! A human!

Led my soul to dry,

 

Sure I will wake up one day,

Scream with music,

Fly with angels,

Everything shall be climactic,

 

And someday we’ll be walking down the same street,

When my eyes transfix the sky,

To miss you passing by,

That day you’ll lose a bit of me...

 

...But most of you

Reviews

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. oh my ... says em ... and i agree ... so does "the wind talker 1252" ... who will soon be joining WC ... but details later ... we're famished ... about to eat ... :) ...

[Frantzuu]

This was a beautifully written poem with lots of emotions invested in it. Great write

[Khaaki]

Wonderful... you write very beautifully... "that day you will lose a bit of me... but most of you"... very subtle...

[Emily B]

wow! you are a poet to be reckoned with . . . yes