Spectrum.

Spectrum.

A Poem by abhas
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hallucinating life.

"

A thousand bubbles with my face

Painted in three colours

Black and white

I stare endlessly

 

Graze on green

Running around on the computer screen

Upside down... inside out

The crack on the wall grows

 

Wires... tangled wires...

All zeros on the watch

An ill cry of please

Shaved inner peace

 

The constant hum in the ears

Growing louder... filling my head

Heart beats forgotten

Blinking fireflies

 

No ammo... no ammo...

Coughing blood

Incinerated

                         I stand                           

In Power

Smiling in my climax...

© 2011 abhas


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You create some wild visions. The poem strong statements made the poem a pleasure to read.
"The constant hum in the ears
Growing louder... filling my head
Heart beats forgotten
Blinking fireflies"
A strong ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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. as a fan of your poetry, it's immensely rewarding to witness your evolution as a poet ... i believe this genre of writing is commonly referred to as "a stream of consciousness" ... and rightfully so ... there's a consciousness here that is tough not to notice ... you seem to have written this from a place of extreme self awareness ... while attempting to face the most lethal of memories ... truly powerful writing ... this ...

. as a fan of you ... the human being ... it is extremely rewarding to witness ... your evolution to a place of strength ... yes, strength ... it takes a lot of strength to accept all that has gone wrong ... the little there is to hold on to ... and not be silenced ... it's great that ... you ... the human being ... expresses ... makes me believe in you ... more and more ... and more ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

don't leave home without enough ammo, or you'll be hallucinating death

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You create some wild visions. The poem strong statements made the poem a pleasure to read.
"The constant hum in the ears
Growing louder... filling my head
Heart beats forgotten
Blinking fireflies"
A strong ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 14, 2011
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Kolkata, India



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