Fire

Fire

A Poem by Abhishek Ramkissoon
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Raging fire in the heart..inspired by listening to "Set Fire To The Rain-Adele"

"
yes you came, you saw and you left
leaving me so in rage..
i gave you all
my heart, my life, my soul
you just pretend, to be but in truth 
you were never going to be..
i stayed there, prayed and begged,
alone i was left to plead
my case, my fate.
the wings you gave
they burned and i fell so hard
i kept looking for ya,
but you never came, never came
in the fires my tormented heart felt all that pain
i suffered, i cried, you did not explain
how or why, you just acted
like there never was nothing
that i thought was meant to be
but you did know,yes you did
i won't fall to your feet and all these words you said
false they turned out to be,
just like you, blind and fake
you smile while i cry
and you don't even hear my screams...
i forsake you now, i leave your memories down there
to burn, to burn
in this fire that i chained in my heart
i move on.....it was dark..but now its over..
someone else will someday claim me..

© 2013 Abhishek Ramkissoon


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... the wings you gave
they burned and i fell so hard.
- Very sour memories but can feel the positive vibe. Time heals. Good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVE RAGES OVER LOSS ... THERE ARE OTHER FISH IN THE SEA ... HUGS .. JAZZY

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on October 19, 2011
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Abhishek Ramkissoon
Abhishek Ramkissoon

Vacoas, Plaine Wilhems, Mauritius



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I seek and derive most pleasure form writing,i do not really have a real category of genre,i write and its up to people to see what it really means..i write basically about myself,my own experinces bu.. more..

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