even in pain...

even in pain...

A Poem by a broken poetess

© 2014 a broken poetess

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This even in Pain is a beautiful write has a lovely ring to it of a growing love that last a lifetime or two Written on a sticky note to hang on the billboard forever and a day. Terms I like to use in a love and respect play write would say. Love me now Love me later Love me till the day I die. If that's all right with you that's all right with me. God bless this writings is prefect affection.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow!! Makes me want to go back to the drawing board!

Posted 9 Years Ago

A wonderful piece that is beautifully expressed, nice imagery. Strong words.
The passion and love run deep within.
The last few lines were amazing.

A job well done.

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

love like light, an enlightening refrain, "even in pain/ he loves me still" nice to have this assurance of attention and respect, such choice and the impossibility of being one's only person in one's life, and how I fear deep love sometimes when I don't understand it

Posted 9 Years Ago

Such a smooth piece, I really like this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago

nice poetry .. i liked it a lot

Posted 9 Years Ago

a broken poetess

9 Years Ago

thank you! you're such an encouragement!

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6 Reviews
Added on October 20, 2014
Last Updated on October 20, 2014
Tags: poem, poetry, prose


a broken poetess
a broken poetess

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