even in pain...

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

This even in Pain is a beautiful write has a lovely ring to it of a growing love that last a lifetime or two Written on a sticky note to hang on the billboard forever and a day. Terms I like to use in a love and respect play write would say. Love me now Love me later Love me till the day I die. If that's all right with you that's all right with me. God bless this writings is prefect affection.

[Love Nik]

Wow!! Makes me want to go back to the drawing board!

[Angad Waraich]

A wonderful piece that is beautifully expressed, nice imagery. Strong words.
The passion and love run deep within.
The last few lines were amazing.

A job well done.

Thank you for sharing.
-Angad

[Laura Lynn]

love like light, an enlightening refrain, "even in pain/ he loves me still" nice to have this assurance of attention and respect, such choice and the impossibility of being one's only person in one's life, and how I fear deep love sometimes when I don't understand it

[nafisa]

Such a smooth piece, I really like this one.

[jennifer little]

nice poetry .. i liked it a lot

[a broken poetess]

thank you! you're such an encouragement!