Elements

Someday I know
I’ll crawl out of this hole
And into the sunlight
As it plants warm kisses
On my cheek.

“Welcome back from the dark”
It says
“Won’t you stay a little longer this time?”

“Here.”
Says the wind.
“Let me breathe gently through your hair”

“I’m here”
Says the rain.
“I’ll wash away your fear.”

I feel my strength rising
At the sound of their words
And pull myself out
Of my deep dark hole.

The sun hits my face.
The wind blows through my hair.
The rain…

Oh my favorite….

The rain gives me air.

Reviews

[Manel]

you are a very good writer
i love the way you used the element we can you them letterly or we can also refert them to people whom are there for us in our bad times
nicely written with grace and elegance
it simply great thanks for sharing
i can't wait to read your next poem

[Bala Gorthi]

You used the elements as the kind saviors that help us come out of our shells. I liked the idea of of showing the elements as sources of strength and support.
I for one,believe in the power of universal forces so your write touched me. Bathing in the elements to rejuvenate oneself.....
A good idea.........
Thanks for sharing. keep writing.