The Sneaky Submissive

The Sneaky Submissive

A Poem by disconnectedspirit

Dangerous activities mixed with pleasure abound,

Temptations pull the soul to rebellion,

Hawk eyes pierce and watch every word written,

Freedom of choice has been stripped,

Lashings from a whip of control and dominance leave bleeding scars,

Burning the soul to tears of longings,

Desires and passions unfulfilled scream inside,

Blame is shifted to the real bandit of her soul.

© 2011 disconnectedspirit


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Wow, you said so much with so few words. I love the words you used. Nice:)

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disconnectedspirit
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A poet who writes about things like nature, God, and other things. I am not based on emotional type of writings and proceeding with other type of poems. more..

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