I want

its about a free spirit of a poet that is willing to do what the soul says and not what others a saying. Freedom of creation

Don't make rhymes, if is poetry  I want.

Don't follow the rules, if is inspiration I want.

Don't take orders, if is vulgarity that I don't want.

Don't follow the crowd , if its talent I want.

Don't take out of the heart, if is you I want.

Author's Note

Feel free to comment and rate, because its about a freedom of creation , ruleless world of imagination and inspiration.

Reviews

[Jodelle]

I'm not sure about this, it seems quite contrived and disjointed. If that is what you were looking for then well done! If you were looking for something that flowed and developed on your meaning here then I think you should look carefully about a set rhyming scheme.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. I agree with your logic. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this one got me a little tied up...in the first two lines, i wanted to replace "is" with "it's"...

third line i wanted to take out "that"

and the last line confused me...wasn't sure what you wanted to say there...i think the theme of this is good..but it is a bit rough in presentation.

jacob

[David Wesley]

I think you should expand upon this. I'm curious where you can go.

[Rahul]

I've fav. this piece...500/500. write more about it, i wanna read more.

[Kristin Lee]

I like the expression and the need for freedom expressed therin. Well stated! Beautiful picture too.

[Acucena G.]

Thank you for liking the poem Kristin , and that flower is called Acucena .

[Baby Ricochet]

Feel free

[Acucena G.]

Hahaha , I am feeling free

[Imara]

I love that you "Stick it to the man" haha. The out of order phrasing, the over all feel and crazyness of it all is very indulging! And I love the bit of everything that is just everywhere!
"Don't take out of the heart, if is you I want" Here is a little confusing, even for this poem all the lines flowed together on one idea of disobedience and creativity. I though at first you were touching on the theme of love with the object of this affection being poetry. However it says "Don't take out of the heart."so that ruined that idea. Am I reading the whole poem wrong. Please explain this line.
Great job, I really liked it! :D

[Acucena G.]

Yes Imara that was the ideia, sharing the love for poetry but acting in a rebel way, but that line was also strange for me, because at first I wanted to write "is poetry that I want" , it was also confusing , then maybe I can try "art" that I want, what do you think ?

[Imara]

I think "art" or maybe "craft" would work better

[Acucena G.]

Thank you once again

[Jack...]

Originality is the theme and what this poem expresses. I like how you are opening up to poetry but don't give me rhymes. Very cool my friend.

[Acucena G.]

Thank you very much my friend.

[quinfinn]

sounds like an excellent plan of action to me. stick to your guns. well penned and nicely expressed.

[Acucena G.]

Lets act then , lol , thank you once again quinfinn