Of life there be monogamy

-Of life there be monogamy
Born concubine to God,
unless the mother of himself;
she is his wife.

-With death, in excess, indulged by gluttony.
Men were born of regret,
to spread their seed;
In hope, her offspring's expectations are fed.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"Men were born of regret,
to spread their seed;
In hope, her offspring's expectations are fed."

This is the third poem of yours which I'm reading and it's just keeps getting better and better :)
This one is like wow!!!
What a raw talent you have, but you just need to write it in a better structure....That will make you shine as a jewel!