Old Things and Old Feelings

Old Things and Old Feelings

A Poem by stargirl23

on the radio today, they played an old song

it wasn’t good�"but I sang along

the year I first heard it was when I would go

lay in mulch, sand, dirt, or snow


our photograph, taken under a twisting tree

right after that argument you left me

the smile drawn on your face drew a smile on mine

as my hand grasped for another bottle of wine

© 2016 stargirl23


Author's Note

stargirl23
I'd like to add more stanzas to this so consider it a work in progress for now.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Yes I can understand how music can cause us to think back to old memories, sometimes it can be very bittersweet because they are good memories, but those times are no longer there. Good job with writing the emotion.

Posted 8 Years Ago


stargirl23

8 Years Ago

Thank you:)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

8 Years Ago

^^ You're welcome!
Music has a way of tuning us into memories, both wanted and unwanted, in a way that few things can. The foggily recalled tunes of where we were and with who never cease to amaze with the forgotten records of the mind being slowly replayed, surprising us with how soon we forget the memories it captures.
Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


stargirl23

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Always love to hear your thoughts.

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

132 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 23, 2016
Last Updated on February 23, 2016
Tags: poem, nostalgia, feelings, emotion

Author

stargirl23
stargirl23

About
15 years old, amateur everything more..

Writing
Dreams Dreams

A Poem by stargirl23