To all awakes!

Awakes are those people who are awake whole night and are busy in their works. They experience things which are totally imaginary. :D

To all Awakes!

 

It is a peaceful night,

for those who are still awake

Cold moon and its white light

from which fairies come down,

and are stopping by.

 

Awakes can listen wolf’s growl,

and see owl’s big eyes…

Vampires, climbing over windows

Ready to suck blood!

 

…this peaceful night

O awakes, can simply make you fly

among darkest fantasies

 

Don’t be afraid.

As you’ll be closing eyes,

diminishing will be those who made your heart pounce!

 

Awakes you have,

a stronger will and heart.

You don’t get scared

Yet it’s a still a peaceful night.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is wonderful writing and i found it quite engaging. awakes....i had not heard that one. in my experience, there are those who work nights and there are insomniacs....these are the people awake during the night hours (other than vampires and other malicious beasties) at any rate, this was most enjoyable, well done!

[Aditi Mahajan]

thanks for your kind words :)

[Matthew vonHone]

Very good work. The imagery here is great. I could almost imagine a parent putting a child down for the night while reciting your poem. Classic, timeless.

Cheers,
Matt

[Sami Khalil]

Into my library...:)............

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice and magical as the nights. Bravo...:)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thats amazing/....lovely writing must say

[zainul]

Awesome thing.
Getting frightened by the fearful animals and getting charmed by the alluring moon light.
Well done.

[Aehr]

I love the description, and I always enjoy poems with good description :D The font you used adds to the mysteriousness and sense of magic that the poem has. Great job!

[Aditi Mahajan]

:)