i couldn't think of a title

i couldn't think of a title

A Poem by aether

Hidden within the darkness, resided a low flame.
It reached out to touch him.
The touch was warm and gentle, and he did not resist.

Heat surged through his body,
His heart soured and his eyes lit alight.
It brought its hand to his neck,
The touch was hot and powerful, and he did not resist.

Instead, he pushed his hand deep within.
He found that the heart of the fire was cool.
It soothed his burning body and he kept his hand there,
until it had completely melted away.

© 2021 aether


Author's Note

aether
This is the first poem I've written like... ever and I would really appreciate any feedback! But I don't really know how to tag it so idk if anyone will actually see it whoops

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Added on July 24, 2021
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aether
aether

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Hi, I'm Aether and I am just starting out writing creatively. I'm looking forward to my skills improving and developing and I created this account to try and help me with that more..