LOVE ME NOW INSTEAD

You will realize that my tears were not fake

You will forgive all my mistakes

You will finally see my invisible love

You will realize that I was a gift for you from above

You will say that you loved me

You will sleep every night with a wish to see me in your dream

My thoughts will occupy your head

You will remember all the crazy stuff I have said

You will realize I was a good daughter and a good friend

All when my life will end?

Are you waiting for me lie on my grave bed

Please love me now instead ...

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Thank you Afra...You are proving yourself to be at one point a shimering glass of sparkly champagine and then at the other end just a plain glass of tap water...This, I am sorry to say, is the latter....The ending is very good but the rest of it kinda reads like an 80s slow hair band song....You have proven to me time and time and time again that you can just blow me away with a masterpiece and then shove something out there that is well for lack of a better word...Plain....And that is not you...You can do better...MUCH better...

[Dominique]

This is sad and wonderful. I love how you put the end in perspective with the title.

[Serenity Faith]

This one packs a powerful punch...just WoW! Very well done Afra

[Annabelle Lee]

WOW!

[murrill]

I like this poem it is one of the best I read so far from you.

[Skye]

So emotional and sad, beautiful poem.

[MOON]

Sad emotional write some learn too late or love too late.

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a sad story. Some people don't know how to give love. Taught by their parent. Love is give and take. Sometime you must demand attention. A sad ending. No parent want to know what they lost in death. Thank you for create thoughts in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tomi]

Very Emotional, A pleasant surprising but sad 3rd stanza, was thinking something else.
Good write, i enjoyed reading this.. Thank you for sharing...God bless

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very moving piece....sometimes we so desperatley cry out....hope people
realise...

[Michael G.]

Intense is a word used already to describe this poem. It's a good word for it. Good write.