come lay with me

 

Come lay with me

as we watch

our souls dismount �" to play

come lay with me

and record the moments of life

that we will make today

watch as our souls

dance

hand and hand

and cheek to cheek

watch as our souls

play hide and seek

find each other and

discover the freak

relax your guards

tell them to go home

come lay with me

just us �" all alone

see why I love you

as I visit your reason for the same

whisper for my attention

hum for me �" my name

let me explore you

while you are free to run through my camp

take pictures for the heart to develop

and place in the moments �" kept

come lay with me tonight

lets look at the love that we have

then sleep with me in you

and you in me

waking to a new day and new understanding

of each other and of love

garner

Reviews

[Nianque]

I liked it a lot. very emotional.

[zombiikillah666]

Lovely (:
emotional piece.
i like this alot.

[Gomer LePoet]

Ah! The smell of ramance is in the air. juicy words -
"let me explore you while you are free to run through my camp"
I'm sold.

[A.Lee]

This has such a soft romantic feel to it. Lovely job.

[R.S. Wilder]

Romantic, romantic, romantic, romantic and (sighs so deeply my insides feel like exploding!!!!)
I'm blushing so hard my cheeks hurt - especially as I think about enacting this.
Great job!!!!

[Beatles9322]

take pictures for the heart to develop

and place in the moments " kept


WOW! This is so romantic and lovely! Very beautiful.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and lovely. I like this alot. Shows alot of feeling.
Very well written and expressed.

[Ruth]

This is lovely sweet
A real infusion of connection and understanding
The only true way to evolve!
Beautifully done
xx

[blood red skies]

Good write... serenity and love away from chaos. I dig.