A Dream

My first poem :/

Can someone wake me up

from this dream?

I don't need to see the

monsters that are

running in my head.

I don't want to see the

blood dripping down

my legs.

Wake me from 

this nightmare,

before it is too late. 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Nobody.]

I like this one. It draws pictures in the mind...scary. sometimes, simple is the best way to write a poem. sometimes, the experience is poetry all by itself...without the need for fancy words and forms. in my opinion, this was one of those times. well done.
Cheers!
R.G.

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I like it, but it seems a bit too simple. I really like the idea, but you could use more description and stuff to convey the feeling more. So I'd go and have a look at that :) I think this has a lot of potential though

[Misty Blue Eyes]

Been there. i feel the pain like it was yesterday.. i liked the poem